Oliver Cheatham是20世纪80年代最受欢迎的R&B歌手之一,在RCA唱片发行了经典单曲
【Get Down Saturday Night】,之后发行了【Mama Said】 【Put A Little Love In Your Heart】【Things To Make U Happy】 【Turning Point】 【Wish On A Star】等经典作品,
2003年与Room 5乐队合作创作了【Make Luv】【Music And You】
Its known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.Some reasons are as followed.First, maybe there are too many exams in our study. And they are all too difficult. At the same time, the students who always cheat in exams are too lazy to work hard. Whats more, to please their teachers and parents, they do so.Personally, cheating is a wrong thing to do. It goes against the school-rules. Also we might as well work by heart, be honest. Working hard leads to a good result. 这是一篇给材料作文,写一篇关于学生作弊现象的议论文。写作中注意写明部分学生作弊的原因,注意从正反两方面论述观点。本文主要是一般现在时态,注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意适当使用连词,序数词,上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。my opinion on cheating in examinationsit is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. as students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.on the other hand, some of us are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. so when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.in my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. we students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. whats more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations. 试题分析:本文属于提纲类作文,文章的要点都以表格的形式给了出来,提纲类作文的关键在于要点不能遗漏和省略,表达一定要全面,覆盖要覆盖的所有内容。要表达全面清楚。要注意谋篇布局,文章使用一般现在时为主,在翻译要点的时候,不要一定按照它的顺序,可以灵活表达。在选择词汇时要选择一些高级的词汇,;在句型的选择方面要运用多样化的句型如倒装句,强调句,省略句等丰富文章的表达,让文章更有层次,更有文采。 【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,运用了一些词组:on the other hand另一方面, instead of 代替,范文中的句式多变,运用不同的语法知识: it is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. 这句话用了主语从句,as students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.这句话用了定语从句, so when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.这句话用了省略句, in my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools.这句话用了it做形式主语,文章还使用了whats more,这样的词使文章更加连贯。